– First one out of 5… converted all original copy to website format. Doesn’t look bad, just needs more breathing room.

– 2/5. Subtracted some copy, not bad as a layout. More breathing room.

– 3/5. Has more breathing room and looks a bit more like a website. Very clean, soothing design.

– 4/5. Has the text being the focus on the top. Kind of off balances it. Still not a bad layout.

– 5/5. Best one out of all, ‘zig-zag’ motion works well for this.